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Early/rough draft "I'm an Alien" stuff!

The translation's not actually finished yet, and some of the stuff that is translated is on the rough side. If you can help, check out the translation Thingy over here:

http://wakaba.c3.cx/notes/notes.pl

(you can add more pages to work on down at the bottom - about the last third of the pages haven't be started yet)

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On the early pages, the font sizes may be a bit wonky.

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Thanks go to rabidkimba for all of his work on the translation so far!

The sound effects in these were a pain to edit out, but it's been fun re-doing them in English.

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Maybe this close to New Years is a good time to bump this.

I really like the characters shown here. Is there any more of this available?

>> No.11  

I'd love to continue working on this, but the translation notes kind of got farked over when the old board went down; I can't tell which pages they were referring to. Would be happy to get the pages back up on the thingy and get down to business, if anybody's up for polishing off the translation, though!

>> No.12  

I'm curious, why is ABe permanently stuck on the adolescent wavelength?

>> No.13  

Lain was 13 or 14, Niea is around 19, Haibane is up to 20, Texh just sucked major ass. Maybe ABe doesn't have the life experience to understand the experience of older persons? And why always introverted teenage girls?

>> No.14  

>>13

>>And why always introverted teenage girls?

Why not?

>> No.15  
>> Maybe ABe doesn't have the life experience to understand the experience of older persons?

By this logic, somebody like Miyazaki makes films with young female leads because he doesn't have enough "life experience". Yeah, right.

>> No.16  

There aren't any creators in Japan who do things other than introverted teenage girls. At least he isn't Key.

>> No.17  

>>15 here

12 here.

Miyazaki's girls don't seem like young girls; the way they're young girls is in a sort of symbolic way. The psychological insight is general, not specific, whereas ABe's girls seem to draw on ABe's own experience.

If you've seen Wasteland inside the Robot anthology, however, ABe seems to be branching out. Ran is a particularly interesting Texhnolyze character, but for the first time, men, like Ichise, Yoshii, and Kano, seem to have meaning beyond their relationship to the main female lead. On the other hand, Texhnolyze sucked for characterizations, and Wasteland was somewhat disappointing.

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Bumping because I'm wondering what the hell happened to this.

>> No.19  

The translation Thingy linked up there links in all of its pictures. The pictures got moved or removed, so suddenly I'm left with a bunch of translations all out of order. I also don't think all the pages ever got finished.

Still got the cleaned files and a bit more than you see here edited in... but that's at home, which is about four weeks away for me right now.

>> No.20  

It's a BLAST FROM THE PAST!

Well, six months.



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